Zelfury's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Need A Dispenser Here]

AWESOME

This flash is a total win, plz make more!

BreadFruitLock responds:

Need a dispenser here!

[Sonic the Unstoppable]

it was good

it was pretty short though, just couldent get into it
nice try though!

Golden-Fox responds:

At least you gave better criticism then others.

[Red and Blue . E2]

there is a good and bad side to this cartoon...

on one hand the quality of all your drawings is very high, your a great artist, and i like alot of what was in this

on the other hand it seems like you tryed very hard on some parts, but then decided to crap out on others... (repeating the same chasing scene over and over)

please for the next episode, dont worry so much on graphics, make your next run more smooth, and it will do much better im sure

Pezboy440 responds:

Lol ok ill work on more animating on the next one. :D

[VT-5]

not bad for a fist attempt

im sure you will get some shitty reviews but forget them, there are some good parts to this flash, at the beggining if u drew that computer than at least you have some drawing skills, and all of the other pictures were high quality. Hers something's you can work on...

Sound! come on your killin me, some sfx and music would have done wonders here.

More animation! most of this flash was a mouse and pointing and clicking, maybe next time add a guy to control the mouse.

other than the keep trying! by the way the uber blam isint a bad idea, newqrounds could use one, there are alot of flashes that just need to be destroyed right away!

Mailesmyth responds:

There is a low BG music, and a little sound. Only mouseclicks, but better than nothing.

[Luigi VS. MasterHand]

cool

i liked it

CIA responds:

Thanks!
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